OP here. Here to answer this
 >>/25150/

Constructive feedback

I play guitar too. It sounds like you were practicing with your guitar, made a good tune and thought man this sounds pretty good, I need to record this

Which is okay if you're starting out. Think of making songs as a composition/theater play when you get much better in the future. 

It has a beginning/opening,continuation, bridge, ending.

Something along those lines. Here's some basic guides to music composition. Not all inclusive but good to start

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Verse-chorus_form

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thirty-two-bar_form

Also, judging from your musical choice, I'd wager to think that you're a Scandinavian anon  or American anon That type of music is pretty popular there. 



That's all for now. Will give you some resources for you to start making music when I get some time off tomorrow