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>  Subjunctive. I feel too low IQ to really get in the nitty gritty details but I did enjoy it and it felt "fresh", compared to the usual stuff I read. 

I have only just barely started to skim it. Will see how hard it is for me to grasp  slight but VERY rudimentary interest in linguistics aside.   

> I was getting into it felt like that it ended abruptly.

I remember partly thinking that myself, albeit:
> over 50k horse words 

I wasn't sure if that was just my own warped sense of pacing from reading so many 100K plus word fics over the years.