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> "falling with style"
I like this name.
But a walk, tremble?
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Controlled, fall is it not?
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The fall might be flight.
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Wow, this inspired a Haiku if my medication deluded and already tired brain got this right. It is a poor haiku that could have better wording. The meaning being:
> So Flarestar would use a weightlessness spell to catapult herself into the air, then switch to falling with style and glide around playfully as she slowly drifted back to the ground.
If walking is a controlled fall, this is flight in my book.
> Meh. It is pretty old now,
How old, if you mind my curiosity?
> and it felt at the time as if it was not my writing, because I wouldn't have created those characters.
I understand anon not connecting to it, but I think the story and characters would work and you shouldn't totally discard it. I can relate to feeling disconnected to some writing though. This is not me.
> But I've enjoyed re-reading it quite a bit, so there's that.
I have had similar experiences when I have found parts of my aborted longfic. I can relate.