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> I thought you meant Luna had written it in the heat of the moment. It actually came out quite well honestly. I liked the vibe I got from that.
I basically don´t know if it´s Luna, me or if it´s Luna writing my thoughts to Celestia.

> Go whever your heart takes you, yeah that may sound gay and retarded but I mean that. Don't fear it being low quality and focus on personal satisfaction. It's supposed to be a bit of an experiment anyways.
and my heart took me somewhere else. Are you ready for it? 
> the quiet of the dark leading somepony to a revelation... maybe one that can't handle well, yet can't go back to before. Yeah, you did a pretty good job conveying that this time around. 
she is a villain but good villains must have good or understandable points of view for taking that direction. Psychology and past events are key for those changes.

> This is my favorite line. It's like she was actively thinking about the words and how they related to her current state. How she was a nightmare in the moon and that being the seed for the name. I know it's a small and perhaps unintended detail but that's what I drew from it.
If that was stuck, yeah I am glad it did. I just tried to justify the origin of her name. A desperate moment between her reasonable yet insane and dangerous thoughts ended up as a title she would unironically claim sooner or later. 


Anyway, are you ready for the /end?