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> my advise is to simply experiment and see where it goes. if you fall into a pattern or feel you need to broaden your horizons you can always try something else new. Its all still new to after all.
I have experimented a lot in this one. It´s the first time I write it in the original language and then translate it in order to be more specific and go through details in the 2nd writing.
> Cool. I certainly like the concept.
You are going to see something similar in this fic.
> May the bridge be with you anon.
It definitely is with me
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I am having those problems too.
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> At least it doesn't look like there is any weird boting stuff right now. 
It would bring some weird activity and have the eye of the mods for a while, not everything are inconveniences but it´s something that I would prefer not to happen.
 
> Really haven't noticed ya repeating the same words too often, but than again I don't have the best eye for such things. Anycase any increase in quality is welcome.
Well, for this one I have tried to make it more diverse. I only hope that emotions don´t get drowned in between the descriptions.
> so it's one of there relatives? 
I think someone has shot at the right target.
> Take as much time as you need. Fully get having a lot on your plate.
I have fortunately had the time to write it. I ended it this morning. I just hope that it gets posted without any problems.

So, one last question....
what does Disney get obsessed with too many times in their movies?
If you have the answer, I present you.....a different case.