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> it seems that we had seen ourselves over there. I know that but I feel that /mlp/ is not the biggest rabbit hole to dig into.

Indeed it is not. What I found isn't impressive but is... interesting, even if it is small potatoes in the grand scheme. As I said, details later as there is still plenty to reply to in this thread.

>  I would have put more effort into the review but I had to break the columns again and understand it in different ways that I had imagined and projected before.

Put more effort? Your review was just as good as any of mine... better in fact, since I often only read stories just twice and sometimes look back in reference at a scene. 

> I don´t know how I have managed to review your fic and I felt lazy these previous days at trying it.Either way, I am messing with English grammar tonight in certain lines and that leaves a bad impression.

Sorry if I had anything worded confusing. Though if you're referring ta your own grammar I did not notice any problems there. I understood ya just fine and nothing seemed weird to me.

> Anyway, I am pretty tired honestly for today so I guess better posts will come after having the responsible task to focus properly yet spontaneous at the same time. 

Take your time. I will take care of the bridges and you get some rest as well.