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> I'm writing a non-green fanfic over at cuckchan. 
you mean /mlp/. I wouldn´t say that /mlp/ is a person and everyone is a cuck over there (the difference between faggot and cuck is a stretch).

> an alternate ending to the series, treating everything up to S9E23 as canon
what are your motivations to skip the last three episodes? I mean, there is no wrong way to fantasize at all and one can dislike the finale (hey, i understand the varied opinions towards any official material, especially with the twist of Grogar at the beginning of the finale).

However, I am just curious about your decision to rewrite it with a different story.
Are you setting it up for a different timeline in which the villains win and take over Equestria?
Are you writing this as a message/protest towards the finale´s direction? 
Are you doing this for raising a different perspective towards the characterization of the legion of Doom? 
Do you do this because you want more material about them? 
Or do you simply do it for fun or want to contribute to the fandom with an inspiring story that is floating in your mind?  

I am asking simple questions to what surrounds all this material (which rounds 35.000 words so this looks like a serious project from yours).

> The story's pastebin so far (I'll share the fimfiction link once I make it)
alright, perfect.

> I apologize if I'm being a retard; this is my first time posting in this thread. 
more like this looks like your first post in this board (I imply this because of the cuckchan word. I heard the word halfchan in 8ch but this one actually reveals the shitposting mindset instantly) because you are assuming that there are lots of users backing up this board when in reality, there are two main users (and one of them doesn´t have English as a mother tongue, so don´t expect a marvelous terminology from him), one shitposter who has never watched the show (except The Last Problem out of curiosity, ironically enough) and a 4th user who has created this thread for these same purposes as you might be looking for at the moment. 

I am not going to lie about this situation and who you are asking for this stuff, so for now, I am simply giving you a meta feedback, asking for your psychological motivations for it. 

> I would really, really love any feedback you guys would be so kind to give. I'm always looking to improve my story.
I might not have read anything yet but I really really appreciate (and encourage) that humble mindset. For now, stick with /mlp/ because it´s your main circle where you are building your ambient and loyal consumers for this fic, so they are more involved with it right now than I am capable to reach (not to mention that we still have to review the finale properly yet). At least, that´s my personal case. 

Anyway, I won´t make any promises nor get your hopes up for now. 

One last question: are you reaching the completion in the near future or do you have plans to make it longer?