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you are right on a somewhat split and conflicted voice, though it is still a  mostly  unified being. 

> the interactions between them are going to gain a lot of value for this story, especially when their mental voices put on the table insightful thoughts that define a lot their intentions.

I'm not sure how much is there to hype. This fic does feel a bit deeper than others I've done and I feel I have a good grasp on the character  or at least a way to interpret said character 

> that´s a sick banner all in all.

Glad you like it. I still think there is a couple of corrections that I should do  like trying text besides generic mspaint style solid colors  

> but I didn´t believe that she would get it so soon. 

It's part of what I'm trying to do. Board wide event thing. So a banner adds to that atmosphere, not to mention that Cosmos both symbolizes the era were in a chaotic way (Pony Life) and the fact that a lot of our focus will be on the comics now. What better way to kick it off by having a little Cosmos related party?  Though there is another who is in need of one...