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> Thanks. It's mostly based on a self criticism song so that must be why I put this on here.


Because your vary self critical? For what it's worth, I think you do a pretty good job setting these darker tones. Thinking a little bit deeper and adding darker subtexts to things like this  >>/502/ That is if you are the same anon 

> Phew lad, now that's surreal and Fanfiction tier with all the letters.


Now not the most advid reader of fanfiction, and I know there's crazier out there, but for me personally the most off the wall concept I ever saw being done unironically was Rarity being shipped with Nute Gunray head green dude from Star Wars the Phantom Menace