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the protagonist. Boy, where do I start with this one? Chapters 4,5,6 expose him the most in general.
Not only we are left with those chapters but we could also add more references from songs that I like, right? Such as:
>>/5421/
> https://genius.com/Ride-end-game-lyrics
> If this keeps happening, this whole room better be prepared because if that´s the game, of course we can play it.
meant for building up more tensions between Cloud Zapper and the protagonist. But wait, there is more.
Didn´t I mention at some point back in 2018 that it I loved a lot an album called "And Nothing Hurt" (from Spiritualized that was begging for being used as an inspiration for future works? Specifically we are talking about the first song called A Perfect Miracle, which I linked here >>/5439/ and oh: Surprise! Surprise! I have used that song as well for announcing the fanfic with a clip of 15 seconds. >>/5391/.
Still, I haven´t finished yet with this song because we are going to toy with its lyrics as well, particularly in the last two chapters. We are repeating here the formula that I used for Luna and Novo´s stories posted in this same thread:
https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/spiritualized/aperfectmiracle.html
>>/5434/
> “So, all this means that we are never going to see ourselves again?” he asked.
> “Well, I´ve met someone else here and you should do it yourself” I responded.
>>/5437/
> I might have seen lots of corrupted guards or fakers out there and in comparison to what I have experienced, you are the only mare I have met who is truly honest and true” I said.
> “You know, my mind is a mess
>>/5438/
> Who could even imagine sleeping here with calm surroundings like these? Sure, it´s not perfect but it´s close to dream up a perfect miracle, or at least, it was for the average pony until now.
> However, as the days pass I might not need that offer…I am slowly finding it less necessary in my eyes...
> So, commander… please don´t call…
> …please don´t call...
not only I have quoted them but I have deviated them so much from the songs context that they feel organic without noticing that I have quoted this song. I have used them for establishing Stella´s sincerity to her character and as inner thoughts from the protagonist towards the existence of Seaquestria and living a life there with Stella´s accompanying him from now on, leaving behind little by little his desire to go back to Canterlot. This is what relieves the fic from the intense middle part and brings a romantic feeling in this story that makes it slice of life-ish (relatively) and plays more according to more mundane situations.
However...