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Wow that certainly is a bit more complex than I thought. As I said I did detect some cryptic or greater meanings, particularly with the the end and the scene with the painting but I was way off I think on my internal speculation. My thoughts were that whatever work itself was something to do with an exiled military leader or noblemen, not
> The Siege of Numantia by Miguel De Cervantes, written around 1581-1587, a tragedy about the ancient city.
> Hold on, I know what you are thinking. Is that the same Cervantes who wrote Don Quixote?
Never knew of this book. Though I consider myself not much of an established fiction reader so I'm not sure it means much.

My suspensions with the story was that it was at least in part referencing some past tragedy IRL. When you posted the song I thought: "Wow, he is talking about a lost friend or lover". I know the song was sexual and slightly dark but I've known that you used songs just based on the tone rather than the exact lyrical meanings.


> Well, if one has to look at the fanfic, where should one start at digging deeper? There are certain innovation that didn´t appear at all in previous fics and one of them looks very apparent in the 7th chapter  >>/5426/. 
> The words are in italics and they hold certain rhymes so the change of style in terms of writing and the mood makes this stand out more than the rest.
I did notice but I didn't think too much of it. I thought it was used well for dramatic effect as Bluestar. I probably should've directly mentioned in my review.

> SUICIDE...AS AN ACT OF PRIDE
Mass suicide? Dark. I remember in my past having some dark concepts so I can get drawing on it. This is actually a bit more complex with how it used its inspiration.  
> the whole thing offers a deeper and darker tone than the rest of the fic because for the first time, the protagonist admits his fate with a dignified death with all his will. Considering that he was a royal guard, he felt an actual change in his attitude but who was he fighting for? For the kingdom and as a soldier, he revives that piece of dignity with pride and a patriotic sacrifice while the tragedy was approaching to him. 
It was the impulse, the feeling and the act that you were trying to transmit, not the plot. That is where I was wrong in my thoughts. I thought this fic from the way you described it was lifting a bit of a plot from somewhere directly.