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> I may honestly review it

Glad you liked it; please overlook simple spelling errors not because I think they don't matter or want other people to stop bothering me (Hey I do it to; such as, "2012fics in all their* glory") but rather because as I brought this over from its storage place and realized how bad just simple spelling and grammar was (I think I was up past 2AM for days writing this in my spare time) I also decided not to update the "original" because it would look a little like something new had been uploaded, and I didn't want to lose momentum getting it to folks here so ... I made almost no changes.

I would fix the obvious stuff if I were to try and re-upload it somewhere outside of nostalgia about where my writing career began.