>>/7572/
> are any of you familiar with "poetry"?
Not very, as I said:
 >>/7560/
> Poetry wasn't strong.
...
> A mere simpleton I am.
> My grasp English uncertain. 

> Uhm ... here you go?
Honestly, I think it works well enough. My lack of knowedge on the subject not withstanding.

> A noise made -- locate that!
> both ponies and there we sat.
I think it has a slight Dr. Suess quallity with the use of "that" and "sat"  again based off my limited knowledge of poetry  but I find this working well enough both in a cute way and in contrast with such lines as:
> packed and encamped, a trek for hell.
> straight outta Doom, portal tech's might.

I will go ahead and try another one (or two) soon.