>>/7778/
So it wasn't a full thing but just a concept? Sorry, didn't read some of the earlier posts.

 >>/7780/
> Meandering? 

Probably the whole story. I see where they maybe coming from but I've seen many insane longfics that jump around get praise so I don't think he should really be concerned much.

>  grammar and spelling. 

I bet they were britbongs now that I think about it.