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> "Trixie's Ballad"
Honestly, haunting/creepy song song. I have a bit trouble understanding all the lyrics though.

> Also I wanted a time or two following the pony into "the place that doesn't exist"; for an alternate example towards the end when he scares a changeling to death, that is also a 'vision'. 
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> Again, chapters? I spend too much time in the third run because that's what I fap too, in essence.
This fic has a lot of thought put in for certain things considering you also are deriving personal pleasure from it. 

> At work! Can't talk ponies!
Best of luck at work (or were at work). 
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> I can't do a full dissection—if I dare attempt—but I have to ask, what inspired some of the more estoric imagery in this? 
All of these factors I think might make a dissection very interesting if you get around to it.