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> Well, it's 9880 right now, so ... >"over nine thousand" ...?

Just as the board. Hmmmm. Everything is in alignment. 

> The system so far was this: Maize would climb two steps, bracing literally half a hoof on a back leg, and the opposite front leg, on what used to be, millennia ago, a step that was now barely deep enough to stand on. The other legs were braced outward against the stairwell walls. The Breezes would take a couple steps, pulling Fuscia off her ledge and forcing her to scramble to a new position of security. Starry hadn't had to levitationally grab her, yet. The pterripi were 'flying' a little bit, mostly pressing their weight against the cliff outside the stairwell. 

I am a sucker for descriptive little details of adventure like this. Maybe this is a retarded thing to highlight but I enjoy this so much more. Some writers skip over these things and it ruins the sense of adventure and peril in otherwise decent fics.  


> As the magic drifted down,

This is not a correction. Somewhere between a suggestion and a question. Would it be better to use 'their' instead?
> As their magic drifted down,

Or is there some sort of arcane grammatical rule my simple mind is not aware of? 

> bots in my thread

Why a random anime horse though?