>>/9295/
Trying she tried the run the gate, but unfortunately it was getting late. Stars in the sky, so very high, make the little pony wish could fly. 
Favorite line. 

5.5/10 Far from amazing but amused me  and that is far from indifference. 

> Honestly, this doesn't seem like stream of consciousness. Too well structured.

You're probably right. It is more just me writing the first thing that comes to mind when minimal attempt to guide it.

 >>/9296/
> Speaking of /night/. Anyone had any ponies pop up in their dreams lately? 

Actually, yes... a.. somewhat. In the background it has been happening a lot more than it used to. I will need to see my scattered notes but I've had Twilight Sparkle (most common) and Dolores Umbridge pop up in recent history  and /endpone/ too, which only happened a handful of times before 2023. 

> Posters like L23 or CB I could see this style but I am curious if this has any intent or direction to it.

> Still, the general tone of some of the stuff here, including that, is... different. In a good way. 

I think, /night/ = mysterious and just anons running with that a bit more. Plus dream posts, your going to get some weird/funny and interesting stuff when you put all of that together.

> Greatest stories don't come quickly. Whenever it comes, I'll be invested.

Seconded, /)

 >>/9308/
> Haiku

< not-quite-haiku

Like what you are attempting to do. Even if CB is quite correct on it not being a real haiku.

 >>/9317/ 
> Haiku

I still like it, even if the rope thing might not be quite true (more on that in a moment).

> No, actually that's 7-7-7-6, unless 'now i will try a haiku' wasn't your first line, in which case you still have 7-7-~6 which isn't 5-7-5 either. 

I read 'now I will try a haiku' as a something outside the haiku but I could easily be wrong.