>>/9317/
Missed Lu-na (two syllables) and  cre-at-ion (three). In other words, retarded. 

 >>/9333/ 
> /endpone/ popping up in dreams

> trips

Does that mean anything... OOOOOOOH spooky. 

 >>/9330/
Interesting tone. Feels like this must be influenced by something. I do note a few grammatical errors but for something written on a whim I am impressed.