>>/9317/
Missed Lu-na (two syllables) and cre-at-ion (three). In other words, retarded.
>>/9333/
> /endpone/ popping up in dreams
> trips
Does that mean anything... OOOOOOOH spooky.
>>/9330/
Interesting tone. Feels like this must be influenced by something. I do note a few grammatical errors but for something written on a whim I am impressed.