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I may not like the fic and find some of his decisions baffling and whatnot but it's something to see a "deconstructionist" fanfic that doesn't come off as trying too hard like usual.

Hell, it's weird to see a sin kids drama for the first time in a long time not vilify everyone that isn't Loud related. Still not a fan of the whole Gloom thing but it makes sense considering he was coaxed into writing her in to the story. Also, not really a fan of her and Lupa being friends. I don't know about you guys but I've never really believed in them being able to get along, even if they were half siblings.