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0:31 should probably be broken into two lines
0:39 I'll remind you that I'm not sure what she says in the background, it's what I was able to reconstruct from the words I heard clearly but this might be something else
0:52 "your lack delicacy far too much" that "your" was a leftover from previous version of the line, my bad, it's really hard to notice mistakes in one's own text
1:18 I will contest that addition of "are you" to "going out with" it's not in the original and it's not really needed in the subs because the pause is short
1:27 I feel the text dissapears a bit too fast, there's good half a second more it can stay around
1:44 good addition, I missed that stutter
1:50 "mooo" well we'll have to do something with that, I thought that the "so much" bit covers it but the "so" should be "soooo" in that case
maybe there's a good translation for もう in English I missed though
1:54 I don't know what I was thinking, it worked well in my head, but the hyphen will have to go
2:04 that eh dissapears too fast but it's not exactly a proper line of dialogue so I guess we can do it that way